Principles of Lust

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I was trying to write a lemon sequel to 'Dreams'....but I got stuck on the lemon scene as I've never written a lemon before. Since the best way I learn is by practicing....this ficcy is a PWP to help me figure out the components of writing a lemon. I've read so many yaoi lemons, but I never figured that it would be so difficult to actually write one....I mean before I started writing the sequel (which I hope to finish)....I thought...ok...2 guys...kiss here, bite there, suck all around, f*ck, and your done....that's easier said than done! There are so many choices to make....words, actions, reactions. And you have to take note of the atmosphere of the story while you are at it...so in the end all of it can really become hectic....trying to make everything flow, drawing the reader in as much as possible into the story and making them imagine the actions without making the story too wordy, and most importantly, using the words that fit the tempo and the mood....I've read quite a few lemons, but sometimes the author uses a harsh sounding word when it should have a soft sound and completely ruins the mood. Anyways, from now on I will never take another good lemon for granted! BTW, I should mention that this is a SasuNaru PWP and the characters may be on the OOC side! ^____^ Enjoy and c & c!!

~~~ Mochi-chu ^^

Lust

Grabbing the dark haired boy by the wrist, Naruto quickly made his way through the streets to his house. Throwing open the door, he pulled the other boy in, before turning to close and lock it. No sooner did he turn to face his companion was he roughly pushed against the solid piece of wood and his mouth claimed in a savage kiss.

As the two devoured each other's mouths, tongues fighting for dominance, Sasuke slipped his hands under Naruto's cloths. The left worming its way up to tease a nipple and the other tracing patterns of fire along the toned abdomen.

His head held in place by the fierce kiss and his body crushed to the door by the sheer weight of the other, Naruto could only moan in pleasure into the hot mouth against his own; tangling his fingers into dark silky locks, trying to pull the other boy even closer; grinding their dual erections together.

After too short a time for both of them, Sasuke ended the kiss, opting instead to trail a path along the smaller boy's jaw and the white column of the throat offered to him.

Freely moaning now to ever single touch of Sasuke's hands and lips, Naruto sharply cried out as his member was firmly engulfed within Sasuke's hand. Pulling the taller boy down for another soul-searing kiss, Naruto sobbed, tears sliding down his flushed cheeks from the painful erection and the relief so near.

Sensing the distress in his partner, Sasuke increased the pace at which he stroked, finally causing the other boy to come, spilling his hot seed into Sasuke's hand with a hoarse cry, breaking their kiss and violently arching against him as pleasure coursed through his small frame.

Running his hand along the flaccid length in his grip, Sasuke finally pulled his hand out. Examining the milky substance coating it, Sasuke applied a thin film to Naruto's lips, before moving in to taste both the boy and his essence.

Moaning, Naruto broke the light kiss. Taking the hand caked with his semen, Naruto brought it to his mouth and began licking away the proof of his release. Beginning at the palm and working his way to the tips of the finger, nipping and kissing as he went along, causing the other to moan at the display and the jolts of pure pleasure running though his veins.

This was not good. If the little fox didn't stop teasing him right now, Sasuke would end up raping the poor boy. Who could have known that a hand could be so sensitive.

Finally mustering the will power, Sasuke forced his hand away from Naruto, crushing the eager mouth with his own, as he worked to strip him. He wanted Naruto and he wanted him now! If only the jacket would unzip!

"Fuck!" Breaking the kiss, Sasuke tried again to no avail, finally giving in and lifting the garment over the blond head, taking the shirt beneath and the forehead protector off in one swipe. Running his hands along the newly exposed flesh, Sasuke attacked whatever he could within reach of his lips, scooping up the docile child into his arms, taking them both to the preferred comfort of the bedroom.

Laying down Naruto on the bed, Sasuke took one of the boy's sensitive nipples into his mouth, lavishing it with tender affection as he removed the damp underwear and pants. Pulling away, Sasuke quickly divested himself of his own cloths and underwear, releasing his engorged member. Pausing momentarily, Sasuke admired the prone body in front of him. Blue eyes, mere slits from passion. Flushed skin. Cheeks burning at the scrutiny. Legs spread wide.

Moving in between Naruto's legs, Sasuke began to trail kisses down the soft flesh of the inner thigh to the junction, nibbling lightly on the sensitive skin there, tasting the first release. Shuddering at the sudden pleasure, Naruto bucked up as he felt his lover's warm tongue curl within his navel.

Letting his lips roam, Sasuke kissed his way up, adding in hints of tongue and teeth. Finally, reaching the top, Sasuke engaged himself in a slow smoldering kiss, rubbing himself against Naruto.

Warm hands slowly began to fondle Sasuke. Light fingers dancing along his spine, going down to cup and squeeze his rear, reaching further down to curl lightly around his painfully erect member as a nipple became engulfed within a warm moist cavern.

Neither could take the torture any longer. Abruptly pushing away Sasuke, Naruto quickly reversed their positions, pinning the taller boy down and straddling his hips. Leaning down he pressed his lips against Sasuke's with brutal force, plunging his tongue within the other's mouth. Hastily undoing the cap of the lubricant, Naruto reached back, grasping Sasuke's cock and applying the gel.

Breaking the kiss, Naruto got off of Sasuke, laid down and opened his legs. "Sasuke."

The request was unmistakable. Rising from his position, Sasuke reached for the discarded tube of lubrication, only to have himself be stopped. "No."

"But, Naruto..."

"I like it this way." Crawling under his lover, Naruto positioned Sasuke at his entrance.

"You've done this before?!" The response was only a smirk.

Current activity forgotten, Sasuke could only gape. "When? How? With who?!"

"In the past, can't tell you who, not that'd you believe me if I told you and it just happened."

"'It just happened?' How does sex 'just' happen?!"

"I donno. Him. Me. Dark empty classroom. A sturdy desk. Raging hormones on his part. Susceptible and naive prey on my part. And well...you know...boom."

Moving back to lie beside Naruto, Sasuke cover his face, overwhelmed by the information. "'Boom' huh? Well that's just what you did to the mood!"

"Me?! You were the one who had to ask!"

"Well at least it was only once." When silence greeted his ears, Sasuke turned to look at Naruto. He was afraid to ask. "It....was....only once....right?"

Naruto smiled sheepishly. "Well...um...you see..."

"How....how many times exactly /did/ you two sleep together?!"

"Well we really didn't do much sleeping when we were together, but we did it a few times or 10 or more...but it was just sex and it was only with him!"

Groaning, Sasuke covered his head with a pillow. "I can't believe this....so is this just sex too?"

"What?! No!!" Ripping the pillow from Sasuke's face, Naruto leaned over and cupped it, as tears filled his eyes and fell on his lover's cheeks below. "I love you! It was just sex...only with him....I've never touched anyone else this way other than the two of you! Please! I'm telling you the truth!"

Guiltily Sasuke wrapped his arms around the blond boy, pressing the tear stained face to the junction of his neck and shoulder, slowly running soothing circles along his back. "I'm sorry. I was out of line. I guess I end up getting extremely possessive and jealous...and lose control over my mind. But I didn't mean it. You are my first everything...and I wanted me to be yours."

"I'm sorry too. If I had know that one day you'd blindside me, I wouldn't have let anyone ever touch me. But you are the only one I love....it's my promise to you and I'll never break it."

"Honto ni?"

Raising his head and wiping away the remaining tears, Naruto looked fiercely at Sasuke. "Of course! My promises are forever. It's the path I have chosen as a shinobi. I won't break! No matter what!"

"I've never let anyone get as close to me as you, nor have I care as deeply as I do for you. It's a promise then Naruto...forever."

"Hai."

Smiling gently, Sasuke twined his fingers into honey gold locks, slowly forcing Naruto to descend and meet his lips. It was a tender kiss, sweet, but it quickly grew fervent, full of longing, desires, and promises. Sasuke turned them over, pinning the smaller boy to the bed with the full length of his body. Kissing the boy below him was like getting drunk....it was an addiction. How did he manage to do this to him. Ever. Single. Time.

Sasuke suddenly broke the kiss, arching his back in sudden pleasure, forgetting, in a single fluid thrust forcing his length past the tight ring of muscle and into the warm cavity after it.

"Sasuke..." Naruto! Oh God! He had just..."No!! Don't stop!"

"But...I..."

Lifting his legs, Naruto tightly wrapped them around Sasuke, forcing him to bend down over the smaller boy. "It doesn't hurt. Please....I need this...You need this too..."

"I'm sorry." Covering the distance between their faces, Sasuke kissed Naruto hard as he pulled out and thrust his swelled member through, going in deeply, hitting Naruto's prostrate hard, causing him to scream in the sudden jolt of pleasure.

Leaving Naruto's mouth, Sasuke made his way down the column of his throat. Thrusting in faster and harder, marking the blond boy as his own, spurred on by sobbed whisper of his name as the flushed body came up and impaled itself over and over against him.

He was almost to the edge. Busying his mouth and a hand with his lover's nipples, Sasuke reached down and stroked Naruto in rhythm with his thrusts.

Nails scraped over his back and frantic fingers entwined into his hair. With one last thrust and a sharp cry, Sasuke came violently within Naruto, covering the boy's bowels with his seed, the sensation pushing the other uncontrollably over the edge, making him come in Sasuke's hand once more, drenching the hand as well as their abdomens with the white fluid.

The two lover lay together, panting for breath. Naruto broke the silence, tightening his grip on Sasuke, as the other moved to pull out. "Na, Sasuke...let's stay like this tonight."

"If I do, then I'll end up hurting you later."

"I don't care. I just like having you inside of me."

"I care. I don't want to hurt you in anyway, if I can help it."

"Please? It never takes me long to heal...I'll be fine...please, I don't want to separate." Seeing the look of hesitation, Naruto continued with a impish grin. "Come on! I'll let you play doctor on me....just to make sure that I'm alright."

"Sex fiend."

"Well I don't see you refusing the offer!"

"I'm not stupid enough to refuse any such offers coming from you and I happen to like playing doctor."

"Ooooh, aren't we the little hentai!"

"Whatever."

"Na, Sasuke?" Rolling atop Sasuke, Naruto found a comfortable position, snuggling into the arms holding him, covered by the light blanket.

"Nani?"

The elfin face looked up at him. /What kind of spell have you put me under Naruto. To make me lust after you, to let me have you, and still not be sated? What are you doing to me?/

"Aishiteru."

/I see./

Smiling softly, Sasuke pulled the slight frame closer to him, whispering his promise for eternity. "Aishiteru Naruto...aishiteru..."

~~~~*~~~~

It was around the wee hours of dawn when Sasuke nudged Naruto awake.

"Naruto! Wake up!"

"Huh? Wh-what time is it? Is it time to go meet Kakashi-sensei?"

"No. It's almost dawn."

"Then why did you wake me up!" Naruto glared at the dark haired boy though sleep-laden eyes.

"Who was it?"

"Who was who?"

"The guy you...well you know..."

Looking at Sasuke, Naruto couldn't help but give an exasperated laugh. "You haven't slept at all have you?"

"No. Now who was it?"

"This bothers you so much?"

"Would you just tell me!"

"Gaara."

"Ga-Gaara?"

"Yes."

"You mean like Gaara of Hidden Sand Village Gaara?"

"Yeah."

"The one with the gourd and weird eyes and that character on his forehead Gaara?"

"Yup."

"Gaara?"

"Gaara."

"......I always wondered why he looked at you funny....."

"..."

".....That it!!!! I'm going to KILL that bastard!!!!"

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Somewhere in Hidden Sand Village, a gourd-carrying boy sneezed three times.

"Hmmm....someone must really hate me."

Owari.

First please forgive me for dissing Gaara!! I love the kid...really....but Sasuke-kun was being obsessively possessive of Naruto-kun!! I had to do it!!!

Other than that, what did minna think?? Like I said at the top....this is my first ever lemon....so tell me the truth...no sugar coating....was it good or bad....if you don't tell me I can't improve! Boy! I'm sure making a lot of firsts with Naruto ne? ^^ But I'm happy, I've never been ensnared like this by any manga! I just wish there were some merchandise I could get my hands on!!!

Anyways, my mom had to go to work early today...which is the 20th of December...and she just had to turn on the lights....thus waking me up at 7:30 in the morning!! And the sucky part is that I went to bed at 3:30 in the morning >____< But as sleep deprived as I was....Yami-chu refused to leave me alone with the idea for this fic so I just got up and began typing....even though I had everything planned....it took me a while to figure it out in words and you know how my mind churns even while I'm typing so I wasn't finished until 4 in the afternoon....sleepy and famished (didn't bother with breakfast....I sure have weird priorities)....I gobbled down 3 blueberry waffles and then wrote the little omake epilogue at the end....and now I'm off to pack! I'm moving in two days....there's so much stuff...I have no idea where I'm gonna put all of it! I really have to work on my pack rat habits!!

Before I go though I have to tell minna this....originally I just wanted to write a total PWP...wall, bed, done....but then I got to a part where there was an opportunity to add some sort of conflict....and I'm ashamed to say I'm a sucker for those parts....and to think I could have avoided all of it simply by changing a few words around....so first time around I made Naruto super cold...then I decided that it didn't work out....so I tried adding in Orochimaru...which didn't go either....so I finally decided on what you've read above....I donno....Gaara x Naruto just fascinates me for some reason....in my twisted little hentai head they just zing!! Zing...nyahahaha....I looked it up....it's actually a word....ah I'm too easily amused! I need to read more of the manga....but if the opportunity presents itself I want to write a Gaara x Naruto ficcy one day....you know what though....Naruto will then again end up as the uke.....I don't understand....I just can't get the idea of Naruto-uke out of my head....I mean...Naruto is more outgoing and vocal....so shouldn't he be the one playing the seme role? At the least against Sasuke...who's probably tight-lipped about telling whether he likes milk in his tea or not!

Another long after word....but I like to talk about what I am thinking about as I am writing my fics...but it's not like anyone reads these anyways....so whatever! C & C please!!


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